Wednesday, September 22, 2010

Description of the Picture Number 4

              When the day began at school, no one thought there will be a fight between two girls. One of the girls won the fight and seemed very happy to that.she was sitting on a yellow chair , wearing a white shirt with small skirt and brown shoes. But she had a blue eye and red cheek. Inside the office, there was her father and the principal and there was a brown table. On the right of the office, there were many beautiful small pictures like children played together, and there was a yellow medal. In the front of the office, there was a green drawer that  had a yellow file.

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7 comments:

  1. I think that your paragraph have descriptive words. :-)

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  2. I think your paragraph has more clearly sentence.

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  3. I liked the part of the "beautiful small picture"!
    has a lot of detail, keep going! :)

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  4. I can have a imagination about this. :)

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